“…Several broad trends have been observed relating pause patterns during writing with the quality of the resulting text (Alves, Branco, Castro, & Olive, ; Connelly, Dockrell, Walter, & Critten, ; Hayes, ; Kaufer, Hayes, & Flower, ; Miller, ; van den Bergh & Rijlaarsdam, ; Wengelin, ). Similar results have been obtained in prior published research at Educational Testing Service (ETS), including studies by Almond, Deane, Quinlan, Wagner, and Sydorenko (), Deane and Quinlan (), and Deane, Quinlan, and Kostin (). In particular, for stronger writers, text tends to be produced efficiently in longer bursts; pauses are more likely to happen at natural loci for planning such as clause and sentence boundaries, and more editing and revision behavior can be observed.…”