1984
DOI: 10.1177/0741088384001003001
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How Students Read Student Papers

Abstract: This study uses protocol analysis techniques to compare written evaluations of college freshmen with those of instructors in Freshmen English sections. These evaluations of two students papers indicate that many students apply criteria that are significantly and consistently different from those of instructors. The differences suggest that composition teachers who urge students to “write for their peers” may put themselves in a position of having to reward writing that fails to meet basic expectations of acade… Show more

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“…Its use in essays might sound natural and, therefore, not be considered worthy of correction, particularly if students did not have a meaningful model of the desired language form or were not specifically directed to revise for language. Although this highlights Newkirk's (1984) concern regarding the disparity between factors monitored in feedback provided by instructors versus that provided by peers, the results do not imply that such variables cannot be brought under the control of cognitive apprenticeship procedures.…”
Section: Discussioncontrasting
confidence: 65%
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“…Its use in essays might sound natural and, therefore, not be considered worthy of correction, particularly if students did not have a meaningful model of the desired language form or were not specifically directed to revise for language. Although this highlights Newkirk's (1984) concern regarding the disparity between factors monitored in feedback provided by instructors versus that provided by peers, the results do not imply that such variables cannot be brought under the control of cognitive apprenticeship procedures.…”
Section: Discussioncontrasting
confidence: 65%
“…Although using peer collaborations in writing is not new, findings are still mixed and incomplete (DiPardo & Freedman, 1987;Gere, 1987 (Gere & Abbott, 1985;Gere & Stevens, 1985;Nystrand, 1986); others have reported no success (Berkenkotter, 1984;Newkirk, 1984). A major problem with many of these studies is that, in field research with WR students, the structure and controls of laboratory studies have seldom been incorporated; conversely, many of the laboratory studies using collaborative approaches with college students have been artificial in the (short) duration of their treatment procedures and their (lack of) integration with existing classroom activities and curricular demands.…”
Section: Kinslermentioning
confidence: 96%
“…Nystrand and Brandt (1989) observe that intensive peer review (small groups meeting three times per week) used with college students has numerous beneficial effects, especially compared to writing only for the teacher. However, Newkirk (1984) found that college students evaluate their peers' writing using criteria that are not necessarily consistent with teachers' criteria. In other words, what students value in others' writing may conflict with what teachers look for.…”
Section: Résumémentioning
confidence: 97%
“…A s is the case with previous studies on peer and self-ratings of different performance and abilit y, these studies generated consiste nt and moderate correlations with teacher evaluation, along with some noteworthy insights concerning the gaps in evaluatio n criteria among rate rs. For example, Newkirk (1984) found instructors and peer-raters seemed to set different criteria for what constitutes a good essay. Sullivan and H all (1997) 34 Peer rating in E FL writin g reported self-raters took into account effort when self-asse ssing their papers.…”
Section: H Idetoshi Saito and Tom Ok O Fujita 33mentioning
confidence: 99%