This manuscript discusses the use of time series of Sentinel-1 SAR imagery to map regional melt characteristics of glacier ablation in the Hindu Kush Himalaya region.The topic is of high importance to further understand how to operationally use Sentinel-1 SAR backscatter intensity for mapping glacier characteristics. The authors are using the SAR data to investigate the duration of seasonal glacier melt,these are important inputs to surface energy models. Additionally,using time series SAR data is of high importance for further under-C1 TCD Interactive comment Printer-friendly version Discussion paper standing of how to map glaciers using SAR backscatter signals, e.g. refreezing of liquid water in the percolation zone. The authors give a good overview of the regional glacier melt dynamics in the HKH region and this is a very interesting study. However, the presented results are rather general in terms of the regions studied and lacks a proper error analysis.The Text has some long and complex sentences here and there, but is overall relatively easy to understand. We thank the referee for careful review of our work and thoughtful suggestions for improvement. We have conducted major revisions detailed in the responses below. We include all updated figure captions in the response text. Specific comments The chapter about SAR processing (2.3 Computer Infrastructure) is too limited, e.g. there are many processing options in SNAP that are not described properly. To be able to reproduce the data, more information about the processing of Sentinel-1 satellite images is thus needed. Author response (AR) 1: We agree that the section was limited and will modify Section 2.3 as follows; and welcome any further suggestions: Computing Infrastructure A cloud-computing platform and application programming interface with pre-processed radiometrically terrain corrected Sentinel-1 A/B data was used to detect melt characteristics across the region (Gorelick, Hancher et al. 2017). Radiometric terrain C2 TCD Interactive comment Printer-friendly version Discussion paper correction of Sentinel-1 data was conducted upon ingestion to the cloud server using the ESA's method contained within the Sentinel Applications Platform (SNAP) processing toolbox (ESA). The SNAP toolbox is used for processing of Sentinel-1 images and through a stepwise process of updating orbit metadata with restituted orbit files, removal of invalid edge data and low intensity noise, removal of thermal noise, computation of backscatter intensity, and finally orthorectification (Google 2020). The SNAP toolbox terrain correction functionality utilizes the 30m spatial resolution SRTM DEM (Farr 2007, Margulis, Liu et al. 2019). The pre-processed SAR times series data and API functionality used to derive glacier melting characteristics are available from GEE and can be used to recreate the work presented in this study.