The English composition is an important indicator of English learners’ overall language skills and is asked in large-scale English examinations, both in China’s college entrance examinations and graduate examinations and in the TOEFL, GRE, and IELTS examinations in Europe and the United States. Some automatic scoring systems for English writing have been created in the United States and internationally, however the systems still have issues with generalization, accuracy, and error correction. In this paper, we present a method to improve the accuracy of existing automatic composition scoring systems through deep learning techniques in a wireless network environment. Experiments reveal that the method can accurately assess the quality of English learners’ writings, paving the way for the creation of an automated composition scoring system for large-scale machine testing and web-based self-learning platforms.