We are very grateful to the two reviewers for their insightful and constructive comments, which have helped to substantially improve our analysis and physical interpretation. In the following, reviewer comments are written in black, author responses are written in blue, and passages of modified text in the manuscript are written in red. Referee 1 General comments: This paper discusses the sensitivity of dilution of shallow convec-C1 ACPD Interactive comment Printer-friendly version Discussion paper tion as a function of large scale state. While the paper is not unique, it does yield another piece in the puzzle of figuring out how to parameterize entrainment. The paper is generally well written, but sometimes also a little descriptive, with the theoretical interpretation mainly hypothesized. To enhance the paper, I have the following suggestions. I realize that not all of them may be feasible within the scope of this paper. We thank the reviewer for their insightful and valuable comments.