“…In the fourth sentence, the author's sentence seems incoherent because not everything mentioned in the previous sentence is explained. This is similar with the research findings found by Chen (2011) and Nawir & Nappu (2019). The fourth sentence reads that human life is faced with various events, challenges, obstacles, opportunities, and experiences, so coherently, the author should write that in fighting for happiness, goodness, and greed, humans will be faced with various events, challenges, and obstacles.…”