THE IMPACT OF TRANSLATION TECHNIQUES TOWARD THE QUALITY OF TRANSLATION: A Case Study on a Social Text

Ardi, Havid

doi:10.24036/jh.v15i2.6564

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“…This study shows similar result with (Ardi, 2016) who found that the translation quality in a text in this case is social text or non fiction text is quite good in the term of accuracy, acceptability, and readability, though compared to this study it had slight difference in which the translation quality assessment was rated in the term of accuracy, clarity, and reability. Moreover, the present study was conducted on a non fiction text that does not require highly accurate translation but highly readable translation.…”

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Accuracy, Clarity, and Readability (Acr) in Historical Romance Novel Translation

Rosita

2018

Humanus

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Historical novel translation requires an advanced competence of translator in relation with the translation quality: how accurate, clear, and readable the translator tries to deliver the writer's original message to his/her translation version for the readers. The more accurate, clear, and readable the translator's version is, the easier comprehension of the text will be. This paper was an outline of descriptive research which has been conducted to analyze the translation quality assessment in translating historical romance novel Taj: A Story of Mughal India into Taj: Tragedi Di Balik Tanda Cinta Abadi by Maria M. Lubis. There were three variables factors used; the two novels as objective factor, the translator as genetic factor, and the raters as affective factor to analyze, compare, rate, and score the translation quality. The sentences, clauses, phrases that consisted Indian cultural terms from the two novels were chosen as the data. From the analysis, it was found that the translation quality of this translated novel is accurate, high clear, and high readable obviously effected by an eligible translator who has high level competence and performance in translating the novel.Keywords: translation, historical romance novel, accuracy, clarity, and readability. AbstractPenerjemahan novel berlatar sejarah membutuhkan penerjemah yang kompeten jika dilihat dari segi penilalian kualitas terjemahan seperti keakuratan, kejelasan, dan keterbacaan. Semakin akurat, jelas, dan terbaca suatu produk terjemahan, hasil terjemahan semakin akan mudah dipahami. Penelitian ini adalah penelitian deskriptif yang mengidentifikasi dan menggambarkan penilaian kualitas penerjemahan. Seberapa akurat, jelas, dan terbaca novel terjemahan Taj: A Story of Mughal India menjadi Taj: Tragedi Di Balik Tanda Cinta Abadi oleh Maria M. Lubis. Ada tiga faktor variabel yang digunakan; kedua novel sebagai faktor objektif, penerjemah sebagai faktor genetik, dan tim penilai sebagai faktor afektif untuk menganalisis, membandingkan, menilai, dan memberi angka kualitas terjemahan. Kalimat, klausa, ungkapan-ungkapan

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Section: Unreadable or Not Readable Classificationsupporting

confidence: 87%

Accuracy, Clarity, and Readability (Acr) in Historical Romance Novel Translation

Rosita

2018

Humanus

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“…Based on the finding it is also clearly found that literary work represents natural communication by shifting in the translation product. It is in line with the statement of Tianmin (2006) that translating literary works especially novel is different from translating science that should keep the form to avoid the changing of the message or keep the form in TL (Ardi, 2016). In his research related to social science text, some shift is conducted to keep the message.…”

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Form Shifts in Translating Passive Clauses Found in Novel Harry Potter: Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows

Chairina

Jufrizal

Yusdi

2019

Humanus

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Shift is one of the phenomena in translation to suit with the acceptability of translation product. This article aims at finding out the shifts of form in translating passive clauses found in the novel Harry Potter translated by Listiana Srisanti. This research used a qualitative method where the research analysis relied on linguistic description and employed meaning-based to reveal and describe how is the existence of shifts of form and meaning in the translation. The data of this research were passive clauses taken from the novel “Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows” as the source language (SL), and the passive clauses translation in the target language (TL) obtained from the translated Novel “Harry Potter dan Relikui Kematian.” Based on the data analysis, it shows that the translation shift of form comprised structure shifts 67 data (60%), class shifts 37 data (33 %), and unit shifts 8 data (7%). Even though the shifts found in the translation, there was an acceptable translation of passive clauses. Thus, it indicated that there are shifts in translation, but it was acceptable.

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“…Hasil kajian ini sejalan dengan kajian-kajian tersebut karena pada hasil terjemahan Millie juga ditemukan teknik-teknik terjemahan yang meliputi adaptasi, amplifikasi, peminjaman, kalke, kompensasi, deskripsi, kreasi diskursif, kesepadanan lazim, generalisasi, amplifikasi linguistik, penerjemahan harfiah, modulasi, reduksi, substitusi, transposisi, partikularisasi, dan variasi. Beberapa temuan pada kajian ini juga sejalan dengan hasil kajian (Ardi, 2016) yang membahas kualitas hasil terjemahan buku sejarah berjudul The Minangkabau Respons to Dutch Colonial in Nineteeth Century ke dalam bahasa sasaran bahasa Indonesia. Berdasarkan kajiannya, dikemukakan beberapa teknik penerjemahan berikut penilaian kualitas terjemahan dari beberapa responden.…”

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Teknik Penerjemahan People’s Religion: Penerjemahan Teks Religius Berbahasa Sunda Ke Dalam Bahasa Inggris

Riani

2020

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Abstrak: Penerjemahan buku berbahasa Sunda ke dalam bahasa Inggris masih relatif jarang ditemukan. Salah satu yang ada adalah buku People’s Religion. Buku ini berisi ceramah agama Islam dalam bahasa Sunda yang diterjemahkan ke bahasa Inggris oleh Jullian Millie. Buku ini berisi kumpulan ceramah Ustaz Abdul Fatah Ghozali yang diterjemahkan pada tahun 2008. Tujuan penelitian ini adalah mendeskripsikan teknik penerjemahan dari bahasa sumber (BSu) ke dalam bahasa sasaran (BSa) dalam People 's Religion. Metode penelitian ini adalah deskriptif kualitatif, yaitu mendeskripsikan teknik-teknik dalam menerjemahkan bahasa Sunda ke dalam bahasa Inggris. Data dalam penelitian ini adalah kata, frase, dan kalimat dalam BSu dan BSa. Data dicatat, dipadankan, diklasifikasikan, dianalisis, dan disajikan dalam pembahasan. Hasil menunjukkan bahwa terdapat beberapa teknik yang dilakukan penerjemah meliputi adaptasi, amplifikasi, peminjaman, kalke, kompensasi, deskripsi, kreasi diskursif, kesepadanan lazim, generalisasi, amplifikasi linguistik, penerjemahan harfiah, modulasi, reduksi, substitusi, transposisi, partikularisasi, dan variasi.Kata Kunci: teknik penerjemahan, bahasa Sunda, bahasa Inggris Abstract: Translations of Sundanese books into English are still relatively rare. One of the translations existed is a book titled People's Religion. This book contains lectures on Islam in Sundanese which were translated into English by Jullian Millie. This book contains a collection of Ustad Abdul Fatah Ghozali's lectures which were translated in 2008. The purpose of this study is to describe the translation technique from the source language (SL) into the target language (TL) in People's Religion. This research method was descriptive qualitative, which described techniques in translating SL (Sundanese) into TL (English). The data in this study were words, phrases, and sentences in SL and TL. Data were recorded, matched, classified, analyzed, and presented in the discussion. The results showed that there were several techniques carried out by the translator including adaptation, amplification, borrowing, calque, compensation, description, discursive creation, established equivalence, generalization, linguistic amplification, literal translation, modulation, reduction, substitution, transposition, particularization, and variation.Keywords: translation techniques, Sundanese, English

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THE IMPACT OF TRANSLATION TECHNIQUES TOWARD THE QUALITY OF TRANSLATION: A Case Study on a Social Text

Cited by 14 publications

References 5 publications

Accuracy, Clarity, and Readability (Acr) in Historical Romance Novel Translation

Accuracy, Clarity, and Readability (Acr) in Historical Romance Novel Translation

Form Shifts in Translating Passive Clauses Found in Novel Harry Potter: Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows

Teknik Penerjemahan People’s Religion: Penerjemahan Teks Religius Berbahasa Sunda Ke Dalam Bahasa Inggris

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