Translated Language or Edited Language? A Study of Passive Constructions in Translation Manuscripts and their Published Versions

Abstract

Can translated language really be analysed based on published texts, given the many agents that may influence the translator's work before publication? This article seeks to address this question through a parallel corpus study of English business articles, their German translation manuscripts and the published German translations. The objects of study are passive voice constructions. I analyse the frequency of instances where translators used the active voice to translate verbs that are in passive voice in the source text (and vice versa), and whether editors maintained that construction or intervened to change it again. The study finds that translators use the passive voice extensively to translate active voice constructions. Editors intervene often to change such constructions back to active voice. This suggests that translators mainly passivise while editors mainly activise constructions. As a possible motivation to passivise a construction or not, the tense used in the source text is shown to have a significant effect. The paper thus argues that there is a difference between what is actually the language of translation and what we find in published texts.

Fordítástudományi kutatási témák változása az 1990-es évektől napjainkig

“…Varga, 2011). Jelentőssé vált a lektori kompetencia kutatása (Mossop, 2001;Horváth, 2009Horváth, , 2011Robin, 2015aRobin, , 2015bRobin, , 2017bBisiada, 2019). További kutatási témákat szolgáltat a technológia és a gépi segédeszközök hatása a fordítóképzésre és a fordítói munkára.…”

Standardisation in translated language

“…There are numerous variables behind each translation event which inevitably exert an influence on the translational behaviour. Among those variables we find cognitive aspects (see Halverson 2003, Halverson 2007, cross-linguistic, or socio-cultural issues, namely: commercial interests of the translation industry (Corpas Pastor, 2016), editing processes (Bisiada 2017(Bisiada , 2019, the use of translation memories (Pym 2008) and bilingual dictionaries (at least in the case of English-Spanish) (Corpas Pastor 2016, 2017), risk-averse translator performance (Pym 2008(Pym , 2015. Toury (1995) claims that each factor can be influenced by the presence of another, that is enhanced, offset or mitigated.…”

Trekstuaaliset tilat

“…Cordingley & Frigau Manning 2016). Siksi käännöskäsikirjoitukset voivat antaa käännösten kielestä erilaisen kuvan kuin painetut käännökset (Bisiada 2019). Tällaiset havainnot rikastavat ja tarkentavat kuvaa siitä, mitä kääntäminen, tekstuaalisuus ja transmissio ovat.…”