iv Although providing feedback is commonly practiced in education, there is general agreement regarding what type of feedback is most helpful and why it is helpful. This study examined the relationship between various types of feedback, potential internal mediators, and the likelihood of implementing feedback. Five main predictions were developed from the feedback literature in writing, specifically regarding feedback features (summarization, identifying problems, providing solutions, localization, explanations, scope, praise, and mitigating language) as they relate to potential causal mediators of problem or solution understand and problem or solution agreement, leading to the final outcome of feedback implementation.To empirically test the proposed feedback model, 1073 feedback segments from writing assessed by peers was analyzed. Feedback was collected using SWoRD, an online peer review system. Each segment was coded for each of the feedback features, implementation, agreement, and understanding. The correlations between the feedback features, levels of mediating variables, and implementation rates revealed several significant relationships. Understanding was the only significant mediator of implementation. Several feedback features were associated with understanding: including solutions, a summary of the performance, and the location of the problem were associated with increased understanding; and explanations to problems were associated with decreased understanding. Implications of these results are discussed.
THE NATURE OF FEEDBACK: HOW DIFFERENT TYPES OF FEEDBACK AFFECT WRITING PERFORMANCEMelissa
INTRODUCTIONAlthough giving feedback is a generally accepted practice in educational settings, specific features of effective feedback, such as the complexity (i.e., more versus less information) and timing (i.e., immediate versus delayed) of feedback, have been largely disputed (see Mory, 2003; 1996 for review). Moreover, for a complex task such as writing, the conditions that influence feedback effectiveness are likely to be correspondingly complex. An understanding of the conditions under which writers implement feedback they receive is critical to promoting improved writing. The goal of the present study is to identify some of these conditions, based on the hypothesis that specific mediating causal pathways allow external features to influence the writer's implementation of feedback. We are particularly interested in the case of peer feedback.Peers are increasingly used as a source of feedback, both in professional and instructional settings (Toegel & Conger, 2003;Haswell, 2005). Advice regarding useful peer feedback is particularly lacking.Beyond the specific focus of feedback in writing, there is a long, more general history of research on feedback. Overall, three broad meanings of feedback have been examined (Kulhavy & Wager, 1993): 1) some feedback, such as praise, could be considered a motivator that increases a general behavior (e.g., writing or revision activities overall); 2) feedback may specifi...