“…Second, and more importantly, the distribution of modifier sites according to the calculations from Hermansen et al (2014b) does not seem to correspond to experimental data. According to Hermansen et al (2014b), the number of modifier constraints is given by 2 × X R (x) for x ≤ x cr and CN R × X R (x − x crit ) + 2 × X R (x crit ) for x > x crit , where X R (x) is the modifier's molar fraction, x is the compositional variable as in xR 2 O × (1 − x)P 2 O 5 and x crit is Hoppe's critical composition (x crit = ν/CN R , with the modifier valency ν) (Hoppe, 1996), above which the number of doublebonded oxygens is not enough to fully coordinate the modifier ions, which in consequence begin to share non-bridging oxygens and effectively repolymerize the phosphate network. One can see that according to these equations, even at the metaphosphate composition (x = 0.5), there would still be a finite number of modifiers that should be surrounded by double-bonded oxygens since 2 × R(x crit ) > 0, but from 31 P NMR measurements, it is known that at the metaphosphate composition there are no (or almost no) Q 3 groups and, therefore, double-bonded oxygens (Brow, 2000) and also NMR from the modifiers does not show evidence for more than one site (Schneider et al, 2013).…”