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General commentsOverall I was quite happy with the quality and scope of this paper. It is very well written and contains some important findings. Some general and more specific comments are provided below. I think the authors should have the opportunity to think about a few of my comments below; this calls for minor revision.While the paper concerns both hydrology and water quality, I think more attention is given to the latter. I would have liked to seen more results on hydrology. Maybe you could provide a graph (with associated discussion in the text) showing mean event runoff coefficients for each catchment? Given that the paper is already fairly long, this might not be possible. In any case, I recon you could expand your hydrological findings in a separate journal paper.• Response: We are planning a separate paper that details the hydrologic results of this work. However, since both reviewers requested more hydrologic data, we have added a table in the appendix that provides more details on runoff and storm characteristics (Table A1) In the discussion, you present a conceptual model of urban watershed ecosystem function and describe four periods of change. You suggest that the model is for arid urban catchments. I think it would be worth fleshing this section out a bit more. In doing this, maybe you could firstly describe in a general way, what is natural arid catchment hydrology.• Response: We have limited space to add more discussion here, and we already have some information on arid hydrology in the introduction (lines 191-194), and we reference key literature (Osterkamp and Freidman, 2000. We have however, included a bit more discussion about how this model might differ in other regions (now lines 611-618).Where I'm from, the "third" phase in your diagram is very different. We have been installing distributed stormwater infrastructure for the last 15 years. But, our systems are generally designed for pollutant-load reduction-aimed to protect our largest receiving water (a bay). These systems are not designed to restore/protect natural hydrology. Because of this, runoff/ratios tend to still be c...