We appreciate the opportunity to discuss this interesting and thought-provoking paper. We agree with the authors that there is a growing interest in network surveillance with many important applications.In the context of network surveillance, we think it is important to distinguish between the case where the network is deterministic and the case where the network is random.The first case arises when the network itself (ie, the set of vertices/nodes and the set of edges/links) is considered to be fixed and deterministic, and some kind of traffic is being transmitted via the network links. The traffic flow being transmitted through each network link is considered to be a random observation from some statistical model, and the goal of network surveillance in this scenario is to detect whether the random traffic flow through the deterministic network has significantly deviated from normal or baseline conditions. Two of the three examples in the paper fall under this category, namely, monitoring network security and monitoring reliability of data networks. This general framework also includes a variety of interconnected systems beyond computer networks, for example, vehicular traffic on the interstate highway network or electric power transmission via the power grid network. The underlying principles of network surveillance from computer networks can therefore be extended to such networked systems.The second case arises when networks at different point of time are considered to be a time series of random observations from a statistical model, such as the degree corrected stochastic blockmodel in the authors' Section 5.3.2. In this case, the network structure itself is the observed sequence of random variables, and the goal of network surveillance is to detect whether the network structure has significantly deviated from normal or baseline conditions. Examples include email networks (ie, the Enron network from their Section 5), social media networks, and friendship networks.These two cases are inherently different in terms of the statistical framework and the objective of network surveillance. In the first case, the objective is to carry out surveillance on networks, whereas in the second case, the objective is to carry out surveillance of networks. The umbrella term network surveillance appears to include both cases, but we think it is better to distinguish between them, preferably by using different terms to describe the two cases. Perhaps, fixed network surveillance and random network surveillance would work.There are sampling issues with respect to any type of surveillance. For example, how often should the process be sampled? Over what time period should the data be aggregated? In the authors' Figure 2, the number of users is recorded at five-minute intervals. What was the justification for this frequency of sampling? Sampling at a high frequency can make modeling more difficult, whereas sampling at lower frequencies means that detection of anomalies may be unsuccessful or delayed. Zwetsloot and Woodall 1 discusse...