This article explores the question of why competent evaluators award the ratings they do to college students' expository essays. Essays were rewritten to be stronger or weaker in four categories: content, organization, sentence structure, and mechanics. Twelve evaluators first used a 4-point holistic rating scale to judge the essays' quality. Then they rated whether each of the four rewriting categories in each rewritten essay was strong or weak (perceptions). Analyses of variance revealed content and organization to affect ratings most (p < .001). Mechanics and sentence structure had smaller effects, which differed when measured by the actual rewriting versus by the perceptions. Mechanics and sentence structure were significant in their interaction with organization (p < .001 andp < .01, respectively).Very little is known about the process of evaluating students' writing. Most past research on composition evaluation has been correlational rather than experimental. In the usual correlational study in this area, students write papers and teacher-judges rate the quality of the papers. The researcher then examines the paper or the judges for traits associated with high and low ratings. One type of past correlational study (e.g., Killer, Marcotte, & Martin, 1969;Nold & Freedman, 1977;Page, 1968;Slotnick & Knapp, 1971; Thompson, Note 1) attempted to predict ratings with measures of characteristics in the student papers, such as the number of spelling errors or the length of the essay. Another type (e.g., Diederich, French, &Carlton, 1961, andMeyers, McConville, &Coffman, 1966) sought to account for ratings with characteristics of the judges, such as their personal biases or their degree of leniency. The past studies show that characteristics of papers and of judges This article is based on my doctoral dissertation, Influences on the Evaluators of Student Writing, Stanford University, 1977. The research was supported in part by a grant from the Procter and Gamble Foundation. Special thanks go to Robert Calfee, who spent many hours helping me with all aspects of this study, from its inception to the reporting of the results.Requests for reprints should be sent to Sarah Warshauer Freedman,